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Silvi and Lone - Demon -WIP-

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It was night. Silvi looked around.
A car raced past, but expect that everything was quiet. She sat up and stared at the shape on the other side of the motorway. Suddenly it straightened up and ran away.
Not this time! , Silvi thought and jumped with an enormous leap into the air.
She bet her wings and flew with incredible speed over the motorway and into the darkness of the night.
After a while she reached a forest. The darkness averted observing the forest from air, and because of that Silvi let herself sink slowly down to earth, clawing herself at a tree.
Suddenly, with a noise as if vacuum was filled out, the silver dragon disappeared.  Where it hung  on a tree, a young girl with brown hair and silver, blazing eyes fell to the ground.
„Darn… ", Silvi murmured and straightened up. She looked around and ran towards the heart of the forest.

Lone had imagined his new life differently. Instead of  being traced he was now arrested in an invisible cage. Nobody spoke with him, and he actually did not want to talk to anyone here.
He hoped Marduk would soon capture Silvi, and then they could escape together.
Standing in the darkness he could feel the distrust Marducks like a heavy burden which rested on his shoulders.
Suddenly the gates were opened. Pale moon light shined into the subterranean city, and Lone rested his eyes hopeful at the gates. But it was not Marduk, which entered the cave, and the thing Lone saw let his blood run chill.

Silvi still ran. The forest flew past her faster with every moment. She could hear thunder.

All heads turned to the entrance. And then, with a deafening roar, the fire came.

Shinystar leaned gasping on a tree, listening to a distant grumble somewhere from north. She looked around. The forest began glowing around her. What was happening? And then the fire came.

Helplessly Lone had to look at the flames coming toward him. They burned everything in their way. Cries sounded all around the cave, burning bodies ran around, shrieking, collapsing on the floor.
Lone still felt cool, even if his guards were burned to dead, but could he stop such an enormenose power forever?

Silvi looked around. The forest around her already caught fire, and she stood in the center of the flames, in the center of a small clearing. It cracked behind her, and she could only just evade another falling tree. She felt the heat burning her skin. Transforming was far too risky, and she could not resist the fire forever. Where was Lone?

Lone, among all the flames, felt his hair burning of. He could not hold the fire eternally away from him and look for Silvi the same time, but he had survived the worst. He had to find her, but where was she?

Shinystar now was locked in. She already saw how the trunk of the tree broke. How long she could she hold it? Maybe a few seconds, not more. Silvi clasped her hands and began to pray, trying to force the tree away. It fell.

Lone looked around. Even as a wolf it could not withstand the demons power. Despair filled his heart. Where was Silvi?, was the only thing he could think of. He had to find her, he had to or she would die.... He shook his head to clear his mind.
But then, with a force which made him sink to the ground, a thought came into his mind:
„Lone. ", a familiar voice said. „farewell." Silence.
Lone knew what that meant.
It could not be. It could not be! She could not be dead! But deep within his heart he knew it was true... he was too late, too slow
Coolness filled Lones body. There was nothing left… only empties. Suddenly, he began to cry, falling down, cursing himself. Helplessly kneeling on the burning forest ground, the black and red wolf looked around through watery eyes.
He could make out a force coming closer. A pale light became greater and greater with every moment.
Something approached.
Lone stand up. He knew that this would be the last moments of his live, but he wanted to avenge Silvi. He could not die if he wouldn't know that he tried his best to fight the inevitable.
Lone watched the light as it became a blazing shape.
Lone concentrated… and instead of the large wolf there was a human.
Lone Wolf produced his weapon. He held the Scorpion toward the demon and aimed at the head of the horrible creature.
„I will avenge you…. ", he murmured
and shot.
This is a gift for :iconsilvishinystar:
I hope you like it :heart:
But I do have to say some things to it:

First of all, Silvi seems to be dead in the end.
THIS IS NOT TRUE! Silvi is still alive, Lone only freaks out because the situation. I tried to describe his feelings not too exact, because I don´t know how he really would react. So I just inserted the classical sentence: He felt empty.
Second of all, this is not the beginning or the end of the story, it is some part outtaken of the mid, I will upload the rest of the story by editing this deviation.

I know this is not really good, nor the best thing I have ever written. It was really hard to write in English, so please tell me if you have any improvement suggestions. I also would like to hear critic, because this is the first time I tried to describe a panic situation and don´t really know how to do it.

And sorry if it is too short ^^;
Like I said, I will add more.

Thats all. Thank you for reading.
(And sorry if it is in the false category^^)
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vengetachalliam's avatar
thats awsome!!!! i love it. um... my name is silvi